The Apothecary Diaries 15

Mar. 29th, 2026 10:09 pm
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The Apothecary Diaries 15 by Nekokurage

Spoiler warnings ahead for the earlier books.

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vignettes

Mar. 29th, 2026 12:09 pm
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This week's prompt is:
cute 🧸

Anyone can join, with a 50-word creative fiction vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term. Any (G or PG) definition of the word can be used.

All glory, laud and honor,

Mar. 29th, 2026 11:23 am
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 All glory, laud and honor,
To Thee, Redeemer, King,

circle around, circle around

Mar. 29th, 2026 12:03 am
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I finish the first draft! I know what needs to be fixed!

Within days I circle back, and start to revise. It can cool off later --

Within minutes I find two major howlers in the first scene. sigh

draft's done

Mar. 25th, 2026 11:47 pm
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So to speak.

I think the denouement is not quite what it should be, and sticking the ending is vital.

But I think that will be the work of another revision 

Assignment in Brittany

Mar. 25th, 2026 11:47 pm
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Assignment in Brittany by Helen MacInnes

A thriller about an British undercover agent in Brittany, in 1940. The work was published in 1942.

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The angel Gabriel from Heaven came

Mar. 25th, 2026 05:01 pm
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The angel Gabriel from Heaven came,
His wings as drifted snow, his eyes as flame;
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Riding through the Hills

Mar. 24th, 2026 03:20 pm
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A preview of the next installment of Flowers on the Plains, which will be featuring the Jackle-Thorn and the Silver Songbird. ;)
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Our God, our help in ages past

Mar. 22nd, 2026 11:59 am
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Our God, our help in ages past,
our hope for years to come,
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vignettes

Mar. 22nd, 2026 10:54 am
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This week's prompt is:
bell 🔔

Anyone can join, with a 50-word creative fiction vignette in the comments. Your vignette does not have to include the prompt term. Any (G or PG) definition of the word can be used.

down with denouement

Mar. 21st, 2026 06:49 pm
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Denouement is dumb.

I know exactly what has to be revealed. It's not even that much, and only one character can do it.

But I didn't work where. Or with what other events happening about it to give the story shape.

Denouement is dumb.

Monitor Update

Mar. 21st, 2026 01:33 pm
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As of yesterday I no longer have to work and game on a small and somewhat dark monitor. Not only did the second 4k monitor my husband ordered arrive, but the first one he ordered from Amazon arrived through the mail. Since it was so big we had to pick it up at the post office rather than the mail carrier delivering it. It was undamaged after being lost for a few days.

My husband had cooled off enough that he has not automatically sent the Amazon one back. Instead he's thinking of setting it up with my computer. If there are issues and my current video card can't handle it (and I'm not so sure that it can), then my computer will get a new video card similar to the one in my husband's computer.

For now I'm using his old monitor which is a little bigger than the one I had that recently died. It's good to no longer feel like I need to lean close to the screen to see what's going on.

On another note, I found a mod that adds Decorative Lightshafts. They work sort of like paintings, allowing their height to be adjusted. They come in two levels of strength. Here's a screenie with one of them in the loft studio of Gloria's home.
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orchestrating the talk

Mar. 19th, 2026 11:27 pm
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Ah those scenes. Half a dozen things have to be done, by people whose intentions include none of them. Particularly not info-dumping.

But things like the heroine's dropping some knowledge in the middle so that they revise their plans to shove off the problem customer on the newbie.

Or the heroine's brother is talking with the king when she arrives with the prince, thus letting it be known what plans the king is making, when no detail is needed.

And they require careful and subtle orchestrating of what is said when, so as to give everyone motives.

sigh

Witch Hat Atelier, Vol. 14

Mar. 19th, 2026 12:56 pm
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Witch Hat Atelier, Vol. 14 by Kamome Shirahama

The tale continues! Serious spoilers ahead for the earlier works.

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